How my composition improved:
Architecture: My composition that showed architecture improved because on the 2nd piece there was less clutter that wasn't related to the focus of the piece, but it's also not taking up the entire piece as well. The odd perspective on the 1st piece was also fixed in the 2nd piece.
Landscape: My composition that showed a landscape improved because the horizon is easier to tell as well as it is higher up, improving the sense of depth. The 2nd piece also had more variety in what covered the landscape.
Motion: My composition that showed something in motion improved because it showed the destination of the water. Though the original did have a better sense of motion, there was more focus on the water in the 2nd with less clutter.
Portrait: My composition that showed a portrait of someone improved because there was less background clutter. As well as the colors of the background and foreground are complementary, drawing the viewers attention to the person in the portrait.
Still Life: My composition that showed a still life image of 3 objects improved because there was not as many extra objects around, helping put focus on the main subject, it is also not in the center of the piece.6h6t4we